MCM and Thought Bubble: Things to work and what I learnt.

ARTWORK

• Our characters are really good and memorable. We don't have to work on character design as everyone likes them and thinks they're really well perceived. 
• Think about lighting and shading more to make them look more 3D.
• Our colour work is really good, but the level of colour in shading could be more diverse to again add that 3D effect.
• Look at anatomy to refine our work. Not bad but not perfect. Strive for the best! - Look at super defined muscles. - Lee Bradley said look at Bodybuilders for men and Playboy models for girls. - Mention this in COP3.
• Clothing - look at how it actually falls. 
• REFERENCE EVERYTHING.
• Proportions are good but anatomy could be better.
• Perspective needs work.
• Pick up speed.
• Add more weight to the characters. Make the big guys feel heavy.
• Less crosshatching not describing texture.
• Look at the anatomy of clothing.

PAGES

• Action scenes work well, zooming in and out. They are clear. Do this more often with talking shots, - less talking heads, can't see whole character.
•  Easy to read, flows well.
• Make panels more dynamic! Add shading to always know where the light source is. 
• More splash double pages.
• Less taking heads: Dynamism!
• Add establishing shot to Kunjana's comic and introduce her slower.
• Less overbearing colour. 
• Too dark.
• Terrible font on final pages.  Go to BLAMBOT.com, (What they used for Fight club 2, totally free even for commercial use.) ComicCraft.
•   Pay attention to authenticity and rendering.
•  Reference photos.
•  Blue that is the background. Fading mist. Colour that tints in temperature to set the scene.  
•  Drop being able to see Jenny’s nipples – also there’s too much cleavage. One line is fine.  Don’t scare the audience with the cover. 
•  Colour tint to set characters in scene.